The amazing bowling night
In the holiday me and my family went bowling. It was a treat and a family night out.
Fist me and me family got in the car like a rocket and set of when we got to Inglewood we stopped at the dairy and got 2 bags of lollies each. Then we run out the dorr.
Getting in to New Plymouth my hole family was "saying yayayayayayaa!" "We're there" then time for bolwing.
Right time to start mum said. I rushed over to the place that we were bowling at. "Yah I'm first".
Dad won he shouted yah and I shouted no I won dad. Then on the way home from New Plymouth dad kep saying yah I won and I said stop that dad.
That was a great day.
It is great to see that you are trying to include similes in your writing Katelyn.
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Thank's mr tai
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